Fruitful Blessings
He watched his wife dress, her navel peeking from beneath a camisole and between stretch marks as she reached above her head to fix her hair.
That small, intimate part of her reminded him how he worked to know her, to break through the rough, vibrant skin and bitter layers of pith surrounding the most delightful, refreshing burst of fruit inside.
He remembered her beautifully life-worn body when it swelled to carry and nourish the children who shouted at one another just down the hall. And he – he was lucky enough to taste of this bliss every single day.
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This post was inspired by the April 20 Flash Fiction Challenge at Carrot Ranch Communications.
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a navel story. It can include a belly-button, feature an omphalos (geological or cultural), or extend to navel-gazing (used in meditation or to describe excessive self-contemplation). Go where this oddity leads you.
This is so beautiful it made me feel freaky with my own memories when I was pregnant. 😊
Ugh sorry autocorrect is drunk! I swear I typed dreamy. 😜
Thank you. Freaky…dreamy…either way. I loved the autocorrect. Made me laugh. 😀
Great take on this week’s prompt Lisa….beautifully written I have to say and I loved the image you used…
Thank you, Michael. I really loved the visual of that image as well.
Beautiful picture!! Love the story… I LOVE your writing!! 😀
I thought the picture was beautiful, too. I love that you love my writing and I love YOU! <3
As others said, the perfect pic for the story. And it’s a wonderful flash…what beauty really is.
I loved the photo the minute I saw it. And thank you!
Lisa, this is a beautiful piece filled with love and beauty. If only we felt about our own bodies the way this man feels about his wife’s body.
Thanks, Val. too many people don’t.
Your flash reads as sumptuous as a peeling an orange. What a clever take on the prompt!
Thank you, Charli. I had fun with this one – loved the prompt!
This was lovely, tender and sweet. This husband exemplifies what love is.
Thanks, Josie. I loved writing this one.
Very romantic. I to have a happy marriage. 🙂
I can almost see my husband thinking these words…
Thank you.