Rabbit Run
Liz stared hard into the darkness. There was that familiar sound, just enough like someone walking in the attic space above that it made her start. Every time.
Probably a squirrel or a bat or the pair of mourning doves who lived in the neighbor’s tree.
Still, the sound frightened her. Not because Liz believed it was anything sinister, but because it always set her mind racing. Faster they came, fear after fear crashing through her brain, a line of rabbits increasing as they passed.
Tonight would be a long night.
Near morning the eagle’s grasp would save her.
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Written in response to the March 19, 2020, flash fiction challenge at Carrot Ranch Communications.
In 99 words (no more, no less), write a story about a rabbit on the roof. Or many rabbits. Why are they there? Explain the unexpected, go into any genre. Go where the prompt leads!
Featured image by RENE RAUSCHENBERGER from Pixabay
I could almost feel liz’s heart racing as I read your flash. Excellent!
Cool. Thanks, Susan!
Oy! Should I be worried? Is an eagle going to snatch ME up from my front stoop?!
I’m right there with you with this one. Terrific!
You’re good, Liz. The eagle will snatch up the rabbits. 😉
B..b…but…(re: my offering to this weekly’s CR)
Now I have to go look again…hold on.
Aha – yes! Right! You are up on the roof. LOL Maybe want to think about ducking inside!
That’s good. Fear as rabbits; rabbits snatched by Eagle. Well done.
Thanks, D. Definite food chain there, if you will.
Don’t feed fear. It just keeps the critter hanging around.
Yes, far wiser not to.
That sounds like it’s scarier for the rabbits. Nice tension building.
This reminds me of one time I was at my grandmother’s house, and we heard something on the roof. I went out to check, and there were three raccoons up there.
That would be scary indeed if you don’t know what it is! The unknown is often so terrifying. Having an explanation helps. Sometimes. Maybe.
Great use of emotion as well as tension, Lisa. I felt fearful, sad and at peace in 99 words.
I’m happy with how this one turned out, Charli. Thank you.