The Red Chair
Rob’s heart beat faster as he parked his pickup and climbed the steps to the porch. The little red chair sitting in the corner couldn’t be the same one he lost years ago, but he had to ask.
It had been his dad’s chair first, then his. Rob couldn’t remember if it was lost by accident or thrown away on purpose, but he wished he still had it. The same could be said of his dad, if truth be told.
He knocked.
“Ma’am?” he said to the woman behind the screen door, “I was wondering about the red chair…”
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Written in response to the November 2 Flash Fiction Challenge at Carrot Ranch Communications.
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story a chair on a porch. Why is it there, and what might it mean? Think about using it as a prop or the main thrust of your story.
…so am I. More please
I have a growing list of “continue these” ideas in my files.
Intriguing comparison of the fate of the chair and that of his dad. Nice take on the prompt!
Thanks, Magarisa!
“he wished he still had it. The same could be said of his dad, if truth be told.”
Sweet, and understated. Lovely!
Thank you, Liz!
It is nice to find memories in an antique store even if it wasn’t the same chair.
True enough, Frank.
Great sequencing, Lisa: “he wished he still had it. The same could be said of his dad” and of course we all want to know whether it IS the same chair.
Ah, thank you, Anne. I’m so glad that connection works. Yay!
Objects can generate a lot of emotion and memory and you have captured that well here. The big question – is it or isn’t it?
That is so true, Irene. Memory triggers, definitely.
Oh, it is not nice to leave your readers hanging like that! Well done!
😀 Sorry! And thanks for reading, Ruth!
Ah, great internal tension passed from the character’s mind to ours. Well done!
Thank you, Charlie. *curtsies*
Oh my gosh! I want to know! Is it Rob’s????? I am going to assume that it is and that it was sold at a garage sale years and years ago. Just like the jumbo stuffed bear that my brother gave to me in 1962 after he won it at the Seattle World’s Fair …
You recovered the bear??? That’s too good!
Wouldn’t it be wonderful if all such stories turned out so well..?