Anticipating Harvest
Where did he go, she wondered, when he left her? His retreat was much more than physical absence. No, this separation ran deeper. He left not only her, but himself and the world as well.
While he remained in that suspended state, efforts to harvest even the slightest sprout of affection from him proved fruitless; he was unreachable.
She wouldn’t give up trying, though. Crops in the field are enduring reality, reflective of the movement of life toward death…then life once more. Often after a fallow period, soil is most rich.
Turn the soil. Plant a seed. Begin again.
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This post submitted to the September 21 Flash Fiction Challenge at Carrot Ranch Communications.
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story about what it is to gather a harvest. You can use the phrase or show what it means without using the words. Go where the prompt leads.
I love your flash!
Thanks, Susan! I haven’t been around to read many of the others yet, but I’ll get there.
Fallow. I like it. She’s got an organic understanding of her fallow fellow. And the patience of a farmer.
Probably a good thing, that patience!
Interesting flash fiction. I enjoyed it.
Thanks, Patricia!
I could never be creative in such few words! Lovely take on the prompt!
I said that, too, Roshni. But the more you do it, the better you become. It’s great writing exercise! Thanks for reading. Hope you are well.
Poignant yet she has hope. I hope she gains a harvest.
Thank you, Irene. Without hope, what do we have?
Interesting story, Lisa. I wasn’t sure where he was gone, but I got the impression a rebirth may be occurring some time soon.
Into himself, I think. She’s holding out hope for that rebirth as well, Norah.
Wonderful twist on the prompt from yourself too Lisa, merging human emotion with the life and perseverance of nature. A point made that’s all too easily lost in our relationships, that love is a choice, and we need to make it each day, even if they seem unreachable. Lovely read.
Thank you, Rebecca. I really like to explore different perspectives with the flash prompts. This was a great prompt for that.