Love in Ten Lines – Simple Love
Some of my dear bloggy friends, Ivy at Uncharted and Christina and Tony at The Plagued Parent tapped me for the Ten Lines about Love poetry challenge (or whatever the actual name is).
I put it on my to-do list and promptly forgot about it. Then I wrote the poem and promptly forgot about it. So finally, here is my offering. I generally prefer my poetry writing to be less proscribed, but I also find it difficult to resist a challenge.
Simple Love
I love that we
Have a simple love.
Love is homely things
Like clean sheets love
And chicken soup love.
It’s rainy day love
And quiet walks love
And bedtime secrets love.
I love the way
You simply love me.
And now I think I’m suppose to choose some others to write…and I have absolutely no idea because I think they’ve already done it. There are too many and I’ll feel bad if I forget someone, so if you want to write a ten-line poem about love, each line with only four words, and each line containing the word love, dive in! How about EVERYBODY do it and we can spread some love around?
Whoops! I forgot I’m supposed to include a quote about love. Everyone who knows me knows I’m a quote collector, so I merely had to go grab a favorite (or three…because I don’t do favorites).
To start us off, let’s go with Thoreau because you knew I would, right?
There is no remedy for love but to love more.
~ Henry David Thoreau
Next is a quote we have framed in our living room superimposed over a photo of a stack of books. I’ve tried to find the author, but the only answer I get is “anonymous.” So be it.
Every love story is beautiful, but ours is my favorite.
~ Anonymous
And finally, a few words from William Shakespeare. Because Shakespeare and I love him.
“Love looks not with the eyes, but with the mind,
And therefore is winged Cupid painted blind.”
~William Shakespeare, A Midsummer Night’s Dream
This is fabulous! It makes me want to hug you and get coffee with you and just sit and chat for hours.
I love how you love.
Thank you, Christina. We can have coffee and chat for hours anytime!
I love this poem 🙂
Thank you, Crystal. 🙂
Nice work!!! I’m glad you finally remembered. 🙂
Thanks, Christine. I forget a lot of things lately…
MUCH better than my effort. I love ‘chicken soup love’ and ‘clean sheets love’ – so succinct but it sums up the help and the action and the sacrifices required.
Woot! That’s what I was going for. Hot DOG!
Lisa! This is fantastic. Beautiful, sweet, and simple. It leaves the feeling of those clean sheets and chicken soup that you write about. Well done!
Thank you, Sandy! If that is your take-away feeling, then my work here is done. That’s what I was hoping for. I’m glad it turned out well. Yay! (squee) 🙂
Lovely poem. The love is simple, the poem is simple, the meaning is simply – wonderful.
Thank you, Val. I like simple things, so that’s pretty much where it comes from. And you know, lots of people say love is hard, relationships are difficult. Sure, to a point. But do they have to be? At the end of the day, you love one another and you go from there. All the rest works itself out one way or another. Simple. My Grandparents looked at it that way – we love each other and we’re in this for good. Simple. The rest they figured out as they went along.
Clean sheets love… I love that!
Me, too!
I have some serious simple love for clean sheets! Awesome poem
Thanks, Erin. Yeah, I love me some clean sheets. Nothing like fresh sheets and fresh PJs to go to sleep. Ahhh…
awwwww……looooooooooooooooooooooovvvvvvveeeeeee….
Im sending your link off to a friend today! thanks!
Aww, thanks!
Wait, what? Sending my link where?
I love your poem because it truly is the simple things that we do that expresses love for another in the most perfect way!!
I agree, Roshni. And I’ve written many times about just that – perhaps not in poetry, though!
Simple. That’s how love should be in my books as well. No need to make it so damn complicated. Thank you, Lisa.
Thank you, Kelly.
Golly. My comment vanished .Did I post it and it’s awaiting approval? Or did it simply poof into mid air? I’ll find out after I post this comment.
Anywho, back to your poem. Simple. That’s how love should be in my books. No need to make it so damn complicated. Thank you, Lisa.
Yes, you were in my spam folder. There are an elife few who comment here and always get sent to spam. I have NO idea why since I have my moderation set to allow anyone who has two approved comments. You are among great company, I can tell you that. I just can’t figure out how to let you through the spam filter.
It’s a great poem. Love is such a good topic for poetry – I guess that’s why it’s used so often. It’s also a great quote by Shakespeare – he just had such a way with words.
I love Shakespeare. He’s another of my favorites.
Love and death probably rank up there together as great poetry topics – two things everyone wonders about. And they are difficult to define and explain, so I think that’s part of it, too. We write poetry about things we want to understand better.
Lisa this is so good! I still have to do mine and frankly I’m avoiding it because I’m not a good poet. I love the simplicity of this. It feels so genuine.
Thank you, Jen. I like that it says “genuine” to you. That’s a great compliment.
Give it a try – you never know what will come out!
LOVEly, Lisa. Sometimes I think the word love is overused, but can that really ever be true? There will always be room for more love in this world.
Thank you, Dana. To answer that question, in my opinion, it can’t be overused. Can you say you tell your spouse or kids or parents too many times that you love them? I know people who never said and then one day, someone’s gone and there are no more opportunities. Maybe it’s overused in the media version of it – the over-romanticized picture we get from movies, TV, books, etc. So maybe then.
I couldn’t love this more (no pun intended).
I love that you love it.