OctPoWriMo Day 23 – Water Dance
I’m going rebel.
Today’s OctPoWriMo prompt asks us to consider the vastness of the universe, to observe how tiny parts fit together to create a greater whole. I’ll work on that, but it’s not likely to show up here today.
One of the sentence prompts on today’s post inspired me more readily, though. I pulled an old draft from my notebook, worked about five different versions of it, and finally settled on a bit of Haiku.
early spring rainstorm —
toes spin on slippery wood
across the wet bridge
© L.A.L. 2015
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And then I decided to add a bonus – just a short poem from a few years ago brought to mind by the OctPoWriMo blog post title today.
I trudge on
through this strange year of rain,
a perfect drop of hope
carried by the roar of the flood.
© L.A.L. 2001
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Nice to see you back!
Thanks, Henrietta. Feels good to BE back.
I love haiku. These are both lovely. Thank you for sharing.
Hi, Cindy. You know, I kind of love Haiku too.
Ooooooo….I loved the haiku. Then read the poem….love! Don’t make me choose. They are both my favorite.
Thanks, May. You don’t have to choose! 🙂
What a delightful haiku and loved your bonus too. A lovely read. Bastet
Thank you, Bastet! I just couldn’t choose so I went for the double-header! 😀
Lovely. The great challenge about haiku is that you have to say a lot with very few words. You nailed it.
Thanks! And yeah – saying a lot in very few words is always a challenge for me! 😀