Uplifted
Winter came again last night.
The wind takes icy bites of my neck. I turn my collar against the chill, seeking help from glittering sunshine that offers no warmth.
The landscape has dressed in delicate white furs for the occasion of what is – hopefully – winter’s final farewell.
Across the snow-laced field sits a generous puddle, used by geese to swim on warmer days. Empty now, ripples of sunlight dance across its surface, reminiscent of morning light skimming across gentle waves by the seashore.
Two robins rise, defiant red balloons above the snowy fields.
I watch. My lightened spirit soars.
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Written in response to the March 8, 2018, flash fiction challenge at Carrot Ranch Communications.
In 99 words (no more, no less) write a story that features a balloon. It can be a party balloon or a hot air balloon. How does it add to your story? Go where the prompt leads.
I love the imagery in your flash:)
Thank you, Luccia! And thanks for visiting.
Quite uplifting, this one. Love this line: “Across the snow-laced field sits a generous puddle, used by geese to swim on warmer days.”
Thank you, Mahesh!
That was just beautiful writing Lisa. You drew a word picture that I felt I was part of describing a vista I rarely if ever see. It certainly made my spirit soar as well.
Thank you, Irene. Your comment certainly made my morning! This one is more truth than fiction and it was indeed a beautiful scene.
Ah, that such an uplifting flash, Lisa! Best description of robins ever!
They’re perfect with their little red bodies, right? 😀
You have created a really beautiful image, Lisa. I love robins. We don’t have them here, but I can just imagine the beauty of those ” defiant red balloons above the snowy fields”. Gorgeous!
Thank you, Norah. I love when the robins show up – a sure sign that spring is coming. But it seems they almost always arrive just a bit before one or two last snows. That’s good, though – it helps get through these last weeks when we’re all so tired of the cold and snow.
Love the contrast.
Thanks for reading, Chelsea!
Your personification is sublime, Lisa. I can feel the chill.
Awesome. Thank you, Eli. Sublime is such a great compliment!
SO good to see you on here! Got your e-mail re: 6 Words and will answer this week.